July 6, 2008...2:58 pm

Book Review: Twilight

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I’m going to be honest with you here. It’s summer and the way I judge books, for the most part, is how quickly they compel me to turn the pages. –The exception is reading Styron, whom I will still read in the summer even though his books aren’t always page turners– Anyway, I finished the first book in the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyers and I loved it. I thought it was a ton of fun to read. Apparently I’m not the only one since it has consistently been on the top of the bestseller lists. Beside me, Nate is finishing Twilight, too. And, by the look on his face, I think he’s enjoying it. It’s only taken him 2 days to work through the 500-page book.

So millions of people seem to love Twilight. While critics and a zillion writers seem to hate Twilight. Now, we all know that books are a subjective business. It’s perfectly legitimate for some people to “not get” a book and for others it speaks to their heart. Fine. But when a book is as popular as Twilight people seem attack it with particular ferocity. A lot of times, these people are writers. Other examples are Eragon by Christopher Paolini and J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series. These books are expected to live up to every inch of their hype. These books are supposed to be flawless. Because if those writers don’t deserve the accolades and the super huge paycheck. Right? Wrong.

As Pub Rants’ Kristin Nelson puts it, Writers need to look for what is working in these books and learn from it…”Millions of readers can’t be wrong.”

I’ll concede that in Twilight there is repetitive description–a lot of “marble” this and that. There is a ton of teenage angst and even a few–gasp!–unnecessary dialogue tags!

But what about Twilight worked?

Stephenie Meyers is a storyteller. I fell in love with Edward a little bit on each page. Isn’t that what every romance writer yearns for? To make the reader fall in love? That’s not my typical reading experience (perhaps because I don’t read much romance), but still. Edward is an alpha male and completely to-die-for. Read Harlequin’s writing guidelines and see what lead males they look for. The alpha male works. We might wish it weren’t true, but it’s what we want.

Different vampire lore. These vampires are more relatable. They are still outcasts, but they can do many of the same things we do.

The end is thrilling. Hands down. It was a fast-paced, high velocity ending to a book that took its time developing a relationship.

Forks, the town, was a character in the book. I loved the setting. It was a place I didn’t know about, but got to learn about. And few writers succeed in making the setting such an integral part of the narrative.

 

I could go on, but you get the picture. Twilight might not be your favorite book of all time, but there are things about it that are excellent and readers, who have nothing whatsoever to do with the writing process love it and are willing to pay good money for it. Now what can we learn from that?

 

For another Fumbling with Fiction book review check out: Wicked Lovely .

 

Not a big fan of Twilight, but want your vampire fix? I think you might enjoy the House of Night series. Read my review here.

 

 

Status: Spent yesterday researching graphic novel stuff. I downloaded Inkscape in case I decide to attempt lettering, which I think either Ben and I are going to have to. I’ve been working my butt off trying to get the query letter just right so that I’ll be ready to go around July 18th. The deadline is fast approaching and I’ve got so much to get done before we start submissions. It’s amazing the level of accountability that having someone else also depend on you for your writing gives you.

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  • Arch Declaring

    I loved Twilight, but at the same time had a couple basic issues with the book. Like you said, the descriptions of the vampires became extremely repetitive as the book went on. Also, despite the length of the book, I felt that the character development was rushed for all but the two main characters. The only other thing that I didn’t love was that some of the dialogue was drawn out over pages when the characters seemed to be saying the same thing over and over again. However, like you said, to me its all about page turners, and this was definitely that! The story was exciting and I wanted to spend as much with with Edmund as Bella. Thanks for the review!

  • I agree that the development of all but the two main characters was pretty rushed, but I also thought it mimicked Bella’s tunnel vision for Edward.

  • Thanks for the review, I’ve been holding off on reading Twilight simply for these very reasons – it simply looked like a long drawn out fantasy story. But if you (and Nate) can go through it that fast, then it must be a page turner – just what I need for the upcoming week at the lake.

  • SciFi Fanatic–thanks for the comment and I’m glad you are going to check it out. It is a very good lake read, I’d say. It’s just one to have fun with!

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  • I am very excited that you and Nate have finally read Twilight, and liked it!. Meyer’s writing style is definitely addicting, especially with the character development of Edward and Bella’s relationship. There’s just something about the two of them, and the small town of Forks, that seem so real. You fall in love with Edward, and I think that is a big part of how successful the series has become. It’s a fun page-turning read.

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  • I read the first chapter on New Moon online and… I didn’t like it enough to actually buy the book. I might check it out from the library if there isn’t anything better but I won’t buy it. The dream sequence was confusing and overly drawn out. Besides I think we can all agree there are much worse things than getting old. There were at least six seperate descriptions of Edward’s beauty, we only need to hear it a couple of times then we know. Too me it seems stupid that she’s so upset about being an entire one year older than Edward. The older man younger woman thing is so overated and sexist frankly. And her name, Bella Swan, it’s dramatic and too pretty to be a real name nobody has a name that poetic. I might read the rest of the book to see if theres more to it than crying about being old when your only eighteen and Edwards hot looks.

  • I agree that Bella can be a bit annoying, Lori. She clearly is not the most endearing character. But, I do think it might be a realistic view of teenage tunnel vision.

  • As far as “millions of readers can’t be wrong” goes… Lots of people love Fall out Boy. They also watch the Hills, buy things because advertising tells them to, etc. etc.

    Moby Dick wasn’t popular when it came out.

    People didn’t like Van Gogh while he was alive…

    Popularity is not a measure of quality… in fact, it might just be the opposite.

    But… you are right, Twilight turned the pages, just didn’t do anything for the mind.

  • Twilight is my favorite book ever!!!! It was so good… I finished the first book in a day!!! And Im going to see the movie tonight!!!! I LOVE TWILIGHT!!!!

  • hey i havnt read da buk completely yet,but till whea i read…itx jux awesome…
    i cudnt help buh readin’ further n tonyt m gonNa finish it up…
    itx far way betTa than da HarRy Potter series by J.K.Rowlingx….dun know hux comparin wizardx wid mod vampires

  • http://www.hereticalideas.com/2008/10/book-review-twilight/

    *Note: click on he links in the article and you will get even more supporting evidence as to why Twilight is a terrible book. As for your argument that “millions of readers can’t be wrong,” have you ever heard of mob mentality? Millions of people participated in slavery, was that not wrong? Millions of people participated in the Holocaust, was that not wrong? Now, I understand the ridiculousness (and maybe even insensitivity) of comparing those two things with what amounts to an inexplicable pop phenomenon, but right now I cannot come up with anything else that will give credence to my point quite as well.
    I know what you’re going to say: “I just want to read something I can enjoy!” That’s like an obese person who’s just had her leg amputated saying, “I just want to eat stuff that tastes good!” Why can’t you enjoy stuff that’s good for you? I’m not suggesting people start reading Faulkner and McEwan (although it would make me very happy) but come on! Have some taste! If you want a good vampire love teenage-ery type story, read The Silver Kiss. It is much better, and your brain won’t start turning to mold.

  • You’ve gotta love the guy that has to jump to Faulkner when we’re talking about pop fiction. If you wanna say John Green or Suzanne Collins, ok. But let’s try to color inside the lines.

    The point is not that Twilight is the best book ever written. The point is learning what attracts millions of people to a specific story. And given that this is a writer’s website, I think that is a useful exercise. Because I think it is undeniable that some aspect of this story does, in fact, work for people.

  • daniellekolbra

    I loved reading the twilight novels. i’ve also done a review of the books – check it out at http://www.read4fun.today.com

  • I loved the Twilight Saga books and I’m a 32yr old women who felt that Stephenie Meyer did a Great job I feel everyone needs to stop comparing her to JK Rowling and Her Harry Potter Books these are 2 totally different writers with different Stories. Instead I think we should be greatful that these women have made great books that have our kids reading which is alwayz a great thing. Apples and Oranges and honestly its your choice on which you want to choose and if you love both thats fantastic. I feel people are coming down so hard on the Twilight books especially grown ups when these books are intended for young adults. It’s fictional and sometimes thats what we need to escape to a fictional world its not a literary guide on how to live life just my opinion

  • Meyer is a genius. She saw the hole in the market for horny teenage girls and filled it with Twilight. She has made millions from a book which required little talent, creativity or research to write, and I suppose as a fellow writer all I can say is congrats.
    From the point of a reader, however, I’d say that Twilight is probably the worst book I have read. Full of plotholes, moral questioning, and page after page of drab, uninteresting scenes, awkward and poorly written dialogue and two dimensional characters which are completely unbelieveable, Twilight stands in my opinion as one of the most overrated pieces of fiction of all time.
    For any young adults out there wanting a little darker fiction, I’d advise you to read some Koontz or Cornwell and leave these glittery goths alone.
    My 13 year old sister LOVED Twilight, btw.

  • best boook ever

    love it so badly <3

  • I disagree. Before you continue reading, just know that this will be a long and venting post bashing Twilight.

    “Millions of readers can’t be wrong”? Psh. Not even. That’s like saying “millions of people rape and kill children every day, so it can’t be wrong.” NOT. Just because something’s popular doesn’t mean it’s right or good. In my opinion, Twilight lacked a proper story line, character development, good morals and good influence. Honestly. Would you want your child to read a book that supported stalkers, necrophilia, pedophiles, teen pregnancy and unhealthy obsession?

    Despite Meyer’s obvious attempts, she simply cannot write. I am sorry, but her scenarios are cliche and lack the gift of original dialogue. Really. What’s the first thing you learn when you’re in school about story writing? YOU NEED A PLOT. It’s that freaking simple. A plot is like a diamond, it should have many faucets that can shine light on different areas. I would describe Twilight like a piece of glass. You see through a character’s eyes that has about as much ability to look from other perspectives as my shoe.

    Besides that, what is the relationship between Bella and Edward telling our youth? “Oh, no, if your boyfriend’s considerably older than you, it’s hot!” Or what about, “he sneaks into your house to watch you sleep? How sweet!” Sorry, but I think you should call the police. No matter WHAT the situation, it is NEVER healthy to be that obsessed with someone. Period.

    Meyer makes a glamorous idea of Bella and Edward having sex as soon as she’s eighteen. WRONG. My god, he got her FREAKING PREGNANT. How is that good? She was a young ( although not so bright ) woman with her whole life ahead of her. Or maybe not, depending on if she would be turned into a vampire. Yes, we all agree that having a child is a wonderful thing. BUT NOT AT EIGHTEEN. That’s teen pregnancy!

    Speaking of vampires, why the frick would they sparkle? Unless they put some glitter or something on, then I doubt they’d sparkle. Oh, yes, because us teens think that shiny MALE vampire are oh-so-hot. GOD PLEASE KILL ME NOW.

    But you know what makes me really mad about all this? That you see people all over the place saying, “Oh, I want my Edward!” Or, “I’m a vampire!” Or, perhaps worse to their boyfriends, “You should be more like Edward!” Okay, so I won’t deny I have a crush on a character, but taking this into real life and possibly ruining a previously good relationship with a REAL PERSON over a stupid book character? Nuh-uh. GET A BRAIN, PLEASE.

    Agree, disagree, doesn’t matter. Just know that what you’re reading is a piece of elephant dung. ( No offense to the elephants. )

    This is coming from a fourteen year old female, the ideal demographic for this novel. Meyer, get over yourself. J.K. Rowling can kick your sorry little sparking butt any day.


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